I performed a presentation of statistics class.

Jan 22, 2015 20:04
I performed a presentation of statistics class.

Since I couldn't enough prepare the presentation, I was little nervous.

Then, it was ended in peace except the question-and-answer session.

In the session, the teacher asked to me some questions in English, but I couldn't catch all of them.

When I couldn't understand his words, I said just "Ah-uh" or "Yes, maybe" or something words in Japanese.

It was so embarrassing.

However, fortunately he can speak Japanese fluently.

Therefore, he helped me sometimes, and I was saved.

Anyway, I somehow overcame this day.
No. 1 Timmy's correction
  • Since I couldn't enough prepare the presentation, I was little nervous.
  • Since I couldn't prepare enough for the presentation, I was little nervous.
  • In the session, the teacher asked to me some questions in English, but I couldn't catch all of them.
  • In (or: during) the session, the teacher asked me some questions in English, but I couldn't catch all of them.
  • When I couldn't understand his words, I said just "Ah-uh" or "Yes, maybe" or something words in Japanese.
  • When I couldn't understand his words, I said just "Ah-uh" or "Yes, maybe" or similar words in Japanese.
  • However, fortunately he can speak Japanese fluently.
  • However, fortunately he can (or: was able to) speak Japanese fluently.
Nice!
kanotown
Thank you so much always for correcting me! (^-^)
Timmy
You are welcome!
No. 2 Yansen's correction
i'm so proudofyou ᕦ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ᕤ
kanotown
Hehe, thank you so much! :)
No. 3 Caro's correction
  • I performed a presentation of statistics class.
  • I performed a presentation of in statistics class.
  • Since I couldn't enough prepare the presentation, I was little nervous.
  • Since I couldn't prepare enough for the presentation, I was a little nervous.
  • Then, it was ended in peace except the question-and-answer session.
  • Then, it was ended in peace except the question-and-answer session.the presentation ended great, except for the question-and-answer session.
  • Therefore, he helped me sometimes, and I was saved.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Anyway, I somehow overcame this day.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
great entry!! i get nervous too when i am presenting! >u<
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting me! :D
I need more opportunity to get used to presentations.(´;ω;`)
Caro
You're welcome! ^u^
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